Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Rainbows End

This week room 8 has been writing about holidays here is my recount.

1 comment:

  1. You have written a wonderful recount about your families visit to Rainbow's End. I'm glad you got the voucher! You have sequenced your writing well. I wonder how you could re-craft your writing with different vocabulary? - Mrs T

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