I am a student at Halsey Drive School.I hope you enjoy looking at my blog.
You have written a wonderful recount about your families visit to Rainbow's End. I'm glad you got the voucher! You have sequenced your writing well. I wonder how you could re-craft your writing with different vocabulary? - Mrs T
hteage@halseydrive.school.nz
You have written a wonderful recount about your families visit to Rainbow's End. I'm glad you got the voucher! You have sequenced your writing well. I wonder how you could re-craft your writing with different vocabulary? - Mrs T
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